Story Revision Roadmap

Identify the revisions that will truly strengthen your story

Finishing a manuscript is a huge accomplishment. But revision can sometimes feel even harder than writing the first draft.

You may have reached a point where you’re thinking something about the story still feels off.

  • Maybe the pacing isn’t working.
  • Maybe the narrative spine feels unclear.
  • Maybe you’ve revised several times without getting closer to the story you imagined.

The Story Revision Roadmap helps bring clarity to the revision process.

How it works

You submit your completed manuscript along with a short questionnaire about your story goals.

I read the manuscript and evaluate it at a structural and conceptual level, focusing on:

  • the point of your story
  • character motivation and agency
  • narrative drive
  • the world of your book

What you’ll walk away with

A roadmap and coaching on your immediate next steps:

  • a detailed editorial letter
  • identification of the 3–5 revisions that will matter most
  • a one-hour coaching conversation to ensure you have the clarity you need to move forward

Who this is for

Whether you’ve just finishing your manuscript and you’re ready to start revisions, or you’ve been revising for a while but feel you are spinning your wheels and rewriting the same things again and again, what’s most important is to have a clear understanding of what your story needs.

This can be hard when you’re so close to your work. Writer friends and family can be supportive without being constructive. Or, they can give feedback that’s not helpful, or worse, destructive.

This Story Revision Roadmap will give you focused revision priorities so you can focus your energy where it will have the greatest impact, and you can move forward with renewed clarity and confidence.

Details

  • one one-hour coaching session
  • review of your mini-blueprint
  • review of your completed manuscript up to 90,000 words
  • strategic editorial letter capturing story strengths, priorities for revisions, and immediate next steps

Investment

$900*

*Introductory price, only 10 seats available

Ready to bring your revision into focus?