Manuscript Evaluation

Finishing a manuscript is a huge accomplishment. Now, let’s make it awesome.

Many people dream of writing a book. Few actually start. Even fewer finish and get to write those most-satisfying words, ‘The end’. You’re already among the elite. You came up with an amazing, one-of-a-kind idea, you wrote the whole thing from beginning to end, you’ve taken a big breath, and you’ve danced around your house.

Revision is what’s next and it’s where you make the magic happen. But, where to start? This is not the time to dive into the line edits and pick the exact right words, however tempting. Now is the time to evaluate whether you’ve delivered on your idea, your character’s journey, and other big structural considerations that make or break a book.

This Manuscript Evaluation package gets expert eyes on your manuscript, a perspective that includes story craft and market considerations alongside a coaching approach that holds your intentions, skill, and needs as a writer as paramount.

How it works

You submit your completed manuscript along with a short mini-blueprint questionnaire about your story goals. I read the manuscript and evaluate it at a structural and conceptual level, focusing on:

  • the point of your story
  • character motivation and agency
  • narrative drive
  • the world of your book

What you’ll walk away with

With this manuscript evaluation, you’ll receive:

  • a detailed editorial letter
  • identification of the 3–5 revisions that will matter most
  • a one-hour coaching conversation to ensure you have the clarity you need to move forward

Who this is for

This coaching is designed for writers who:

  • need an expert, objective opinion on the state of their manuscript
  • want focused revision priorities so their efforts have the greatest impact
  • have received detailed feedback from an editor but no clarity on where to start
  • feel stuck spinning their wheels in revision hell

Details

  • one one-hour coaching session
  • review of your mini-blueprint
  • review of your completed manuscript up to 90,000 words
  • strategic editorial letter capturing story strengths, priorities for revisions, and immediate next steps

Investment

$900 USD | $1,200 CAD

Add-on: Detailed review of your first 20 pages (5,000 words), with comments on the pages. $200 USD | $250 CAD

Children’s books: Book a discovery call for special pricing

Ready to bring your revision into focus?